“ I think what you published was actually very reasonable.
However, what about this? what if you added a little information? I am not suggesting your information is not good., however
what if you added a headline that makes people desire more?
I mean Наш Грюнвальд 2013 is a little plain. You might
look at Yahoo's front page and note how they write
news headlines to get people interested. You might
add a related video or a pic or two to get readers excited about
what you've written. In my opinion, it might make your
website a little bit more interesting. ”